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Teen Poetry #3

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Wet
Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 60
Brentwood, Tn

0 posted 2000-08-23 09:01 PM

We are the ones who live under the glowing stars.
To see the stars we have to be at peace.
Free the soul,
Free the mind,
Thats all you have to do.
When the stars come to life,
And the night remains still,
You can hear the thoughts from watchers like you.
Deep inside the heart of us,
You can feel the energy flow through everyone.
At this time everyone is nothing,
But nothing is everything.
For when energy like this is so great,
Not even the stars can compare with it.

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

1 posted 2000-08-24 11:58 AM

Wet,
Beautiful and a very interesting subject...it made me think..and that's a good thing.

Angel

Don't mess with the bull, young man. You'll get the horns.

~*Guardian of Light*~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-08-24 01:05 PM

hello!!!this is a good poem!!!you say "to see the stars we have to be at peace"...well i like the stars...and i dont know why but i usually look at them when im angry...its like a whole new world that i am looking at...and it actually does help me calm down...keep up the good work...sorry about all the rambling!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

3 posted 2000-08-24 05:11 PM

I love this poem. I also like stars. When i look up at the sky I see how peace full it is and I think you did a great job. keep it up.
Lovely_Kris

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