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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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I almost stayed up half the night worrying about you, I almost cried myself to sleep then. I almost missed the feel of your arms around me. I almost hated myself for letting you go. Then you woke me up... Or rather I awakened myself. Who misled me to believe you still cared? I'm never right about these things. Hate I don't feel for anyone... Not even after they bruise me. So I forgive you, and in time I know things will be alright... They will calm down for us. I still can't believe I almost said those words for you, I almost wasted my night, my life, my love... I almost cared so much... I almost wanted forever...and ever. * this is one of those exaggerated poems... not neccesarily specific.... |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I think you saying almost might be exaggerating a bit. Cause if you "almost" feel the things that you said you almost felt, you wouldn't be writing this poem. great writing keep it up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey, this was cool. I loved the whole jist of it. Great job,and happy writing... ~Carly The people walking in darkness have seen a great light; on those living in the land of the shadow of death a light has dawned. ~Isaiah 9:1-2 |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks for the replies... wow haven't seen this one in a while.  Thanks again... and I guess you are right, if I almost felt it, I wouldn't the emotion to write with. But some of it was an almost...it didn't quit make it... ya know? Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job and keep posting. The poem shows a lot of emotion.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I agree with Dopey, this one shows a lot of emotion. Nice job writing it! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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