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Emmaline
Junior Member

since 2000-08-20

Posts 15

0 posted 2000-08-22 09:56 PM

Sometimes words fail me,
And nothing can describe,
These feelings running through me.
When you're near,
Touching my hand.
Walking, a warm embrace,
A kiss,
Startles me.
Your spontaneity
Constantly keeps me aware of
Your presense.
Your simple romanticisms;
A flower, a smile, a glance,
Makes me happy beyond reach.
And words fail to describe
These actions, these emotions
You cause and make me feel
And one thought comes to mind:
I love you.
But words fail.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2000-08-22 10:50 PM

I really liked this one, it uses emotion very well. Glad I had the chance to read it!
And one thought comes to mind:
I love you.
But words fail.

[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-22-2000).]

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-08-22 11:00 PM

WoW! Very nice work. It's a happy poem! I haven't written any of those lately......you rock, my friend.

*~Meredith~*

Somebody stop the world,
I want to get off!
*me

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

3 posted 2000-08-22 11:35 PM

Wounderful poem I think you did a great job and keep up the great work.
Lovely_Kris

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2000-08-23 07:17 AM

Words have not failed you Emmaline ... you've described this beautifully!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

5 posted 2000-08-24 01:31 AM

wow this is lovely...beautifully written....i love these thoughts....u're unique style shows through....keep these coming!

salooma

Emmaline
Junior Member

since 2000-08-20

Posts 15

6 posted 2000-08-25 07:12 PM

Thank you all for the comments. I really appreciate them. ~ Emma

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

7 posted 2000-08-26 06:44 PM

I think words seem to fail us all at some point! When you're in love, nothing can describe it, just everything in your eyes.Keep writing, you worded your thoughts well. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Why is it that love always
starts with a HuG
grows with a kIsS
and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

8 posted 2000-08-27 12:27 PM

A very beautiful verse here, words have definitely not failed you! Keep up the excellent work!

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

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