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Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

0 posted 2000-08-22 07:13 PM

*~*Rules of my Love*~*

These words I say,
come straight from my heart.
As I inform you,
right from the start.

Dont play with my head,
and make me think you care.
Cause if you dont want to be with me,
then walk away, dont stay here.

Dont cheat on me,
if you want to keep my heart.
Cause boy it will be over,
just as quick as it did start.

Unless you are out to hurt me,
and see tears fill up in my eyes.
Then always tell me the truth,
never any lies.

I just want to,
make all this clear.
You are the one I love,
and I want you to be aware.

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

thebeautybrat
Member

since 2000-03-30

Posts 114
Florida

1 posted 2000-08-22 07:17 PM

beautiful poem!! very heartfelt words!! loved it!!

Love is the greatest feeling of all...but heartbreak is the worst feeling you can imagine.

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-08-22 07:20 PM

beautybrat~~~thanks for the reply i really appreciate it...im glad that you liked it!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

3 posted 2000-08-22 08:45 PM

Hiya Erin!
GREAT poem! I mean really...I like seeing people (especially girls) who know what they want and won't accept less. Keep'em comin'.

Angel

Don't mess with the bull, young man. You'll get the horns.

~*Guardian of Light*~

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-08-22 10:19 PM

I think these are rules everyone should follow in all of their relationships, thanks for sharing this great poem!

LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

5 posted 2000-08-22 11:05 PM

I love it! But if you don't want to scare all the boys off, call these your 'expectations'.

Rock on!

*~Meredith~*

Somebody stop the world,
I want to get off!
*me

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

6 posted 2000-08-22 11:05 PM

Exactly, set it strait at the beginning....powerful words here, keep up the great work!

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

7 posted 2000-08-23 02:21 AM

Dark Enchantress~~~you know that there are some girls out there that do care if there boyfriends cheat or lie...you know what i mean???

Lakewalker~~~even if you think they should be followed they arent...

LyricFetish~~~what would the guys be afraid of...a girl who knows what she wants and puts her foot down??? if they get scared off oh well their loss not mine!!!LOL

Alwye~~~right from the start they will know...if they dont like it, its not my fault i just dont want to get hurt in the end...if they cant follow the rules then they could keep walking!!!

Thanks all of yous for the replies!!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2000-08-23 07:32 AM

Wonderful rules to live by Erin ... and straight from the heart! Nicely penned!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Chel
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

9 posted 2000-08-23 09:13 AM

Erin,
I loved this poem. It is very true at least for me and you wrote it beautifully. Keep up the great work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

10 posted 2000-08-23 10:09 AM

Great writing.....just don't expect much from other people though cause they might not be able to reach your standards....I saw this quote saying "Love is not searching for someone perfect, but finding someone's imperfections perfect."

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

11 posted 2000-08-23 10:56 AM

Thanks for the replies i really appreciate them...ohh and by the way acire this is just the way i would want a boyfriend...you know that doesnt cheat on me and all that other stuff...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

12 posted 2000-08-23 12:54 PM

wuz up my homegirl. very nice poem. Although, I've always found that the rules of a given relationship change from time to time. The rules you started out with are never the the ones you end up with. I could definately live with these rules.

Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

13 posted 2000-08-23 03:29 PM

Nice poem. Good work. Second day of school and I am scaring myself. I think I actually like algebra. Somebody save me! Please! Anyhow, nice poem. I like it. It sounds like something I wrote once. I really like it. And I have lost complete control of my mind.

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

14 posted 2000-08-23 06:33 PM

Hey hun, It's been a while, I've been dropping in sparatically for short periods of time...but other than that I must say I have been slacking quite a bit...please accept my apologies!

at any cost, this is something EVERY guy needs to receive from girls! Too bad they all think they can treat us wonderful girls badly and lie and cheat and break our hearts at no expense.Oh well, you will find the roght one...and hopefuly I will too. LoL keep your head up! This poem was great!! Love Always~*~Jess Girl~*~

~*~Why is it that love always
starts with a HuG
grows with a kIsS
and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~

Salooma
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since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

15 posted 2000-08-24 12:55 PM

great Erin....keep up the good work. I wish my words could flow these days...my pen seems to be running outa ink!

Salma

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

16 posted 2000-08-24 01:33 AM

jose~~~if i could make my own rules for my boyfriend i would...but i cant!!!i could even just live with these...

allysa~~~well its only the second day it will get better!!!i actually liked alot of my classes the past 2 years cuz i had some cool teachers!!!you havent lost complete control over your mind...its just taking you over!!!LOL

Jessica~~~welcome back girl...so long since i last heard from you...to bad the guys dont follow rules like this!!!then us girls would have it made!!!but see guys go through that big thing of cheating, breaking hearts and lying...and they have to go through it all again...unlike the good guys out there!!!

salooma~~~girl you can write like this and ive seen proof...so until you say you cant do it...i will get you a new pen full of ink!!!LOL

thanks for all the replies!!!i really appreciate it!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

17 posted 2000-08-24 05:08 AM

Hey chick....sorry I don't get on all that much and if I fall behind on all yall's poetry...I really like the attitude behind this one. It shows alot of confidence and assertiveness (I think that's how you spell that one..not sure). Keep um' flowin and I'll try to keep up..luv ya bunches..later.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

18 posted 2000-08-24 11:44 AM

jeremy~~~HI!!!well even if you are busy its ok...at least you try to reply to some poems!!!i havent seen you on in so long...thanks for the reply buddy...next time were both on IM me...OK???

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

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