»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #3
»
The Power of you
| Teen Poetry #3 |
|
The Power of you |
|
|
JR Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 22morris il |
The power of you When your soft, plush hands touch mine, and my body is the figure your arms entwine, My heart warms, my soul brightens beyond all light. You've won my heartand my love that I can not fight. When I touch your smooth tender lips, A sensation runs through me reality slips. My body floats, my hormones rage on, All memories of lovers I've had are gone. When you leave my sight my body shakes, My soul dies, my body falls, my heart aches. I get lost in sorrow theres nothing to do, My body was surged by the power of you. --JR "two roads diverged in a wood and I... I took the one less traveled by... ...And that has made all of the difference." --Robert Frost |
||
| © Copyright 2000 JR - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Nice. I think you did a great job expressing your feeling. Keep up the good work. Lovely_Kris |
||
|
Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
this was really well done i could totaly tell what you were feeling very well expressed keep them coming! Love Ya Bunches ~Jen~  The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
||
|
Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this poem is so sweet JR...whoever you write about in your poems must be really special...you seem to have a way with the words!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
||
|
Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh wow, this was good! It really gets your attention, I love it  |
||
|
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've expressed your longing and desire well JR ... nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
