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Poetry Princess
Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28
Des Moines, IA

0 posted 2000-08-20 12:07 PM


"Hi I am 20 years old and no longer a teen but I wrote this poem when I was 18 and still in high school. Just thought I would share it. Hope you like it"

I LIED

Loving someone is something
I've never done
I never stopped to care
I was just having fun

But then I opened my heart
to one special guy
And then I made a mistake
and I told a lie

Now I know he will never
trust me again
Because when he's gone he'll
ask where I've been

Yet there are alot of things
he doesn't understand
Like I miss the simple touch
of his hand

I've grown so attached I just
can't let him go
But my mistake will never go away
and this I know

I can never change what I've done
no matter how hard I try
And once things are dont they are done
with no answer to why

I can't explain what I did
and I can't make it right
So now I want to run and hide
before it starts another fight

Because now when he looks at me
he thinks of that day
And I know he'll never understand
no matter what I say

Yet I know what I did was wrong
everytime I look in his eyes
But once someone doesn't trust you
they think all you do it tell lies


POETRY PRINCESS "Love is a serious thing, and tears is all it will bring, but how do I bring it to an end, and how do I get my heart to mend?

© Copyright 2000 Randi - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
1 posted 2000-08-20 02:51 PM


You did a great job of telling how you feel about this

But once someone doesn't trust you
they think all you do it tell lies

This is so true sometimes.  I like this a lot, thanks for sharing it with us

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-08-20 04:49 PM


oh wow!!!this is soo good...i like it alot...but i dont see how lakewalker thinks that the one line is true...it might be but i dont think it is...if i didnt trust someone i wouldnt think that all they would tell me is lies...anyways good work!!!who cares if your not a teen anymore i would like to see more of your work...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


Lovely_Kris
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176

3 posted 2000-08-20 11:06 PM


wounderful poem and I think you did a great job. I hope you can earn his trust back and things work out. I hope to read more of your work.
Lovely_Kris

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