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JR Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 22morris il |
for all of you love poem lovers here is another one out of my vault. Every now and then Usualy when I see you Im fine, not a sad thought flows through my mind. I'll live life normal go about my day not worry about what I would say. Most of the time when I talk to you, I dont act different than I normaly do, I dont struggle for words or stutter my speech dont look for words I normally can reach, But every now and then you suprize me, catch me with no guard and I stutter my speech, Or I'll see your face and wonder what to say. Every now and then you get me that way. --JR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Brilliant, simply brilliant, you can't express these feelings we get sometimes much better than that, I often have this trouble too, especially when I want to talk to a girl I like, oh well, guess thats just the way it is, great writing here! ,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_., "I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering, I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection." ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was exellent! i really really liked that, just cuz i know exactly how that feels. Well keep writing! Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
what a good poem!!!you seem like you have alot of talent...good work... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is great, I really enjoyed it. But every now and then you suprize me, catch me with no guard and I stutter my speech, Or I'll see your face and wonder what to say. Every now and then you get me that way |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
WOW this was awesome simply beautiful!!! why isn't this a book submission you would definately have my vote "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
This is a sweet poem  Keep up the good work "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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