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Enough is Enough
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Enough is Enough |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Once again I'm left crying, burned and stained murky blue from all those little things, the terrible pain from you I'm sorry to tell you dear, but I won't take your pretty lies It won't keep me holding on, that's what I've come to realize I loved you with all my heart, I was loyal and understanding too But you took it all for granted and even now you still do You said things would change for us but I can see that isn't true, I'm tired of the torn emotions, So I'm calling it quits - we're through! I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey, great poem. It sux when relationships go bad, but if they hurt you it's better to just end it. Get someone who won't take you for granted. Keep writing Bel |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is one of the best poems that i have read today!!!!!!good work!!!! i like this poem alot...i am sorry that you are going through this...but its not worth being used... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Meladorri Junior Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 14Indianapolis, IN |
Good poem.. it does suck when relationships turn like that, and I know how terrible it feels when you feel like you've been used. You deserve better, and time will heal a wounded heart. All my love. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you all so much. It's hard to stick to my plan because of how much I love him and how promising our relationship seemed but I know what's right for me. And what's right for me is a guy that does what he says he'll do instead of someone never there for me. I know what I want and I won't settle for less....thank you all very much for reminding me of that. (and for your compliments)  Angel< !signature--> I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 08-17-2000).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Great work!!! Follow what you think is right....and don't be afraid of changes. Keep writing As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
nice to see ya back...i think i 'member you from a couple months back...this was beautiful indeed keep these coming!salooma |
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Lurdburger Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 39Carlisle, Cumbria, England |
I'd just like to thank you for this poem, it made me realise something that I really should have seen before. Thank you, and keep writing. |
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