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Craig
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since 1999-06-10
Posts 444


0 posted 2000-08-16 09:20 PM



Struggling with my answers found
I pick my feet up off the ground
Fighting to accept the truth
That I have lost my precious youth

I don’t know when the youth imp came
Conspired to play his wicked game
The wheres and hows are just a mystery
He crossed my brow with furrows deep
He stole the prize I hoped to keep
My cherished store of childhood memory

I danced when I was seventeen
When hairs of gray were never seen
I never thought that death was drawing near
The sun filled summer skies with light
I won fair hearts and every fight
And never tasted sadness loss or fear

But now that imp has stole from me
The thing I thought I’d always be
And left me in this shell to fade away
I push this pen to pass the time
And put a word or two to rhyme
Where I can dream lost dreams of yesterday



Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool:
But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.


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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-08-16 10:42 PM


Wonderful Craig!  Oh where does the time go??? Challenge met and exceeded! Well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

2 posted 2000-08-16 11:09 PM


wow this is certainly beautiful...i cannot even find the words to say...please be kind and post more of your poetry in here! it's breathtaking!

salooma

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-08-17 11:27 AM


Very well done, this is wonderful
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