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Life (Lakewalker's Challenge)
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Life (Lakewalker's Challenge) |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair 
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Struggling with my answers found I pick my feet up off the ground Fighting to accept the truth Bruises cover me in this shame Mentality has never felt the same Amounting to this certain day A found way, a river to follow Valleys behind me, left hollow I conquered and destroyed this feat Worth my everlasting perseverance On these battlegrounds, I war dance King of the hill, goals were met Rising beyond the birds in pride I've created a new man to abide Follow my heart and I will grow I searched and found what I need My life's new, like a planted seed Past is gone, live for the present love, ,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_., |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
okay see jeremy, you really need to see this work from my eyes cause you have such wonderful talent i must say! challenge well met! salooma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Defintely well met. I really like where you went with this, it's great! |
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