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Crystalina123
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since 2000-01-31
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0 posted 2000-08-16 12:51 PM


Struggling with my answers found
I pick my feet up off the ground
Fighting to accept the truth
Struggling to forget the lies.

It’s time we all grew up,
And set childish notions aside.
So now it comes my turn,
Time to use all that I have learned.

Stand up straight,
Always stand tall,
Smile when it hurts,
And never let them know you’re going to fall.


© Copyright 2000 Crystal - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
1 posted 2000-08-16 01:00 PM


Very nicely done, this is a great poem!  Challenge very well met.  I like the message of your poem.
Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

2 posted 2000-08-16 07:47 PM


this was really good...i really enjoyed the ending...inspirational message you've given!

salooma

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