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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I Am alone I can't see anything I Sit in the dark I Feel my heart pounding I Try to speak My Pulse is fast My Body shakes My Ears hear nothing My Arms touch nothing My Body is cold I scream No sound is heard I Am alone "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart some |
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GodsPerfktAngel Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 28Ohio |
Sounds very depressing!!! I hope you dont really feel this way ! anywasy good poem hope to keep reading more! Jocelyn M. Cosgray ~*you cannot hold back a laugh any more than you can a tide,both are forces of nature*~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
this was really nice vada...really original, but i fear the thought of it, seems so depressing but then again i know that sometimes being alone is a good thing. good luck with all... salooma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very powerful words you've written here, nicely done  |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Thanks all, and no I am not the one feeling this way. I wrote it for all the people who are. I am good at putting myself in other people's shoes and writing the feelings down on paper. Thanks again, all!  stay cool  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart some |
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