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Hurting (Lakewalker's challenge)
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Hurting (Lakewalker's challenge) |
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GodsPerfktAngel Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 28Ohio |
If thif tottally bombs tell em I am just gettin the hang of poetry! thanks Struggling with my answers found, I pick my feet up off the ground, Fighting to accept the truth, You kissed my cheek and then you walked away man I would have never thought that it would ever turn out this way We used to be so happy so close and so near and it hurts to think that our love stops here Struggling with my answers found, I pick my feet up off the ground, Fighting to accept the truth, it is all over, all over,me and you Jocelyn M. Cosgray ~*you cannot hold back a laugh any more than you can a tide,both are forces of nature*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is a great poem, you did very well at meeting my challenge! In fact, you passed it with ease. Once again, great poem! [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-16-2000).] |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Ditto Lakewalker's comment on your poem, Angel! Terrific! Excellent poem to meet a challenge!  stay cool  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
angel~~~this is perfect!!!i like what you did with it...good job!!!2 thumbs up for you!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wow....very nice i must say! i gotta try this challange out. Salma |
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