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sweetcollege_girl
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0 posted 2000-08-16 09:27 AM


Eyes of passion
Stare at me
Emerald stones...

Lips like garnet fire
Whisper words
smooth as pearls

I see clouds...
Amethyst puffs
against a turquoise sky

The day goes on
We stay together
In a world of our own

At last, ebony skies fill the night
As stars of diamonds emerge
Topaz flickers from a campfire
Mye eyes of sapphire show in the orange light

I watch our love blossom like a ruby rose


"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin



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Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-08-16 11:21 AM


Did you go shopping at the jewelry store?  I love this poem
GodsPerfktAngel
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2 posted 2000-08-16 11:24 AM


You have a very vibrant imagination,I hope you keep using it for your poetry!!!!

Jocelyn M. Cosgray


~*you cannot hold back a laugh any more than you can a tide,both are forces of nature*~

sweetcollege_girl
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3 posted 2000-08-16 11:25 AM


Funny..yeah..shoplifting is much easier than taking a loan from the bank  

HA HA Lakewalker! ROTFL!  

You try coming up with a poem that has every birthstone in it! I bet yours is in there somewhere...*analyzes poem*

Thanks Angel, For your KIND reply! *glares at Lakewalker* LOL

stay cool  

~~Lavada~~< !signature-->

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin




[This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 08-16-2000).]

Lakewalker
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4 posted 2000-08-16 11:29 AM


Hey, I was being nice.  I would try writing one, but it would never be as good as this
sweetcollege_girl
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5 posted 2000-08-16 01:57 PM


That's better  

You're cool Lakewalker  




"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart some

Salooma
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6 posted 2000-08-16 07:24 PM


this was very interesting....i was losing hope of not finding my birthstone in there until i got to the end...yup my ruby! anyways excellant post...beautiful rainbow  

salooma

Alwye
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7 posted 2000-08-16 10:06 PM


Very very beautiful!  I love all the gems!  And you even have my birthstone (Topaz) in it!  Great work!  

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

CocoBaci
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8 posted 2000-08-16 10:18 PM


A piece of art this is; it's a 'jewel' sweetcollegegirl

   Coco  


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jeremydraul
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9 posted 2000-08-16 10:52 PM


Quite touching, in deed, Lakewalker, you fool! you spoiled the feel of it all! kiddin, ur halerious, Uhm, all i can imagine is a lot of these stones and gems and stuff, the poem created a great picture, keep'em comin, they make me happy!!

Love,
Jeremy

sweetcollege_girl
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10 posted 2000-08-17 01:37 PM


Thanks all for the replies. I made sure I had all the gems in there, that way, evrybody was included!

Jeremy: It's a deal!

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart some

Tamma
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11 posted 2000-08-17 08:50 PM


Loved it Vada!!! I'm the turquise sky!!! Yay i love it  

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.


Jeremy Halstead
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12 posted 2000-08-18 03:30 AM


Well....it someone couldn't picture that one....they've got issues.  You have such vivid descriptions... I'm impressed.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

sweetcollege_girl
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13 posted 2000-08-18 01:02 PM


Thanks to the both of you for replying!


Tamma--Congrats!  

Jeremy: Thanks for the compliment

stay cool

~~Lavada~~






"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart some

Jose Marti
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14 posted 2000-08-19 12:36 PM


Nice poem. It must have been hard to get all of the birthstones in there.
PS: where do you go to college?

sweetcollege_girl
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15 posted 2000-08-21 11:50 AM


Thanks Jose, for the compliment. Yes, it was hard!  

I go to college in Arkansas...Why?

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart some

JR
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Posts 22
morris il
16 posted 2000-08-21 03:15 PM


great job on this poem.  great descriptions and a good scheme. keep up the great work.
            --JR


"two roads diverged in a wood and I...
I took the one less traveled by...
...And that has made all of the difference."
--Robert Frost

sweetcollege_girl
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17 posted 2000-08-22 01:27 PM


Thanks JR, for the compliment!  

Thanks all for replying! It means much to me!  

stay cool

~~Lavada~~





"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart some

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