Would you have walked away?

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Teen Poetry #3

Would you have walked away?

hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

0 posted 2000-08-16 01:09 AM

The words I spoke alone last night,
Were full of anger, fear, and fright;
I trembled and stumbled about
While I embrased a moment of doubt,
And knew that what you desired to hear
Went something like, I love you dear.
Though the night's air was warmly inviting,
I had to stop for a moment of nail biting.
The answer pressed to be answered immediatly,
Though I went about the situation prudently.
Weighing odds while pondering destiny
And concluded i'd keep the rest of me.
So I tucked sanity into my rugged hat
And stepped into darkness, blind as a bat
---Written by:Hoppy

5-29-00

There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

"Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live."

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

1 posted 2000-08-16 01:16 AM

hey hoppy...nice to see ya back here!
great post, i like this a lot...
very interesting.

salooma

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