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TrueLUV
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since 2000-07-19
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Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-08-14 09:52 PM




If you listen carefully you would hear the melody that my heart is playing

If you listen carefully you can feel how much pain it is in

If you try to understand the pain its suffering you won't be able to

The only way you would understand is I you let it open up to you, but I remember as you once told me that love is but a myth and we are the players in the game

You also told me that the world will never hear our melody of love, can know one else see the irony in this story, can know one else feel my pain, will know one else see the tears that flowed from these eyes.

I remeber all the times we shared, and all those times we always ran away to that place we go to experience a love enchantment.

Now I realized it was all a lie to be honest when a girl gets even she will steal away you heart and soul, or better yet when she pricks your heart softly with her needle of revenge to her the pain is sweet, and to us our last chance.

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thug-a-licious
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since 2000-08-08
Posts 27

1 posted 2000-08-15 03:00 AM


This is an awesome poem! I really liked it a lot! u're very good with showing your feelings and I hope to see a lot more of your poetry!
Alexis

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