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'The Hurricane' (everyone contribute)
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'The Hurricane' (everyone contribute) |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina 
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*Hey kids, ok, we used to do this little game sometimes in here and I always loved it, so I thought I'd start one and see how it goes. Peace y'all, I love ya!* A storm is brewing, Watch the sky For soon her clouds Will start to cry Rain drops falling To the ground Like tears which come Your pain to drown Okay everyone, now each of you add a couple of stanzas......and be creative!!! Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Icy whispers Flood the night Reminding of heartache Which destroyed your light. Ashen fingers Run through your hair The Heaven's howl Through the heavy air. Exellent idea LyricFetish! It has been a while since we had one of these. Come on people, lets see some more added!  *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
The raging wind, like a banshee It howls for all its worth, As torrential rains, like talons Rip asunder the fragile earth. The cries of fallen warriors, On the wind, can be heard all 'round, As their departed spirits Weep rivers of rain to the ground. (I gotta find a way to use that in my next poem )< !signature--> -"!!!" [This message has been edited by !!! (edited 08-13-2000).] |
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MelissaL Junior Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 22Joshua Tree, CA, US |
The raging wind subsides Tranquility fills the air All that was tattered and torn Is now in God's kind care Grass glistens with the morning dew As a rainbow starts to emerge Radiant rays of the sun appear The earth has quenched her urge |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Deep in the storm I listen Cries of loneliness in despair Through clouds, the moon glows Fear and fright exist in the air Winds, blowing through the night Chill the skin that I wear In the sky, lightening flickers I can feel the storm growing near |
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Lurdburger Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 39Carlisle, Cumbria, England |
The skies are going mental The heavens have opened wide What have we done to get rained on? Murdered, cheated, blasphemed, lied? It seems we haven't done anything, Just nature running it's course. But still, I'm putting a raincoat on Before it gets any worse! (Sorry 'bout the last 2 lines, I was stuck )[This message has been edited by Lurdburger (edited 08-14-2000).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
This is an awesome idea, we need more responses! |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Hey wow guys, this is awesome! We've got some real talent up in here. I'm impressed! Let's see if we can keep this one going.....rock on! *~Meredith~* Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
The clouds roll before me, They thunder and fall. It seems we have no mercy, From the terrors the wind calls. I look up at the sky so feverious, It's notions upturned. And find this a work of God, For no one else such storm could stir. I don't like it too much, but I thought I'd give it a try... Salooma |
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