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(repost) She Comes to me
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(repost) She Comes to me |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
She comes to me I watch her drink I watch her comb her hair I watch my babygirl smile at me I watch her take away my pain She comes to me I tell her I am who I am who am well who am I? I tell her dark clouds may hang on me sometimes I tell her I've got her in my head At night when I go to bed And I know it sounds lame, but She's the girl of my dreams. I tell her that my love is true She comes to me And I ask her where are you tonight? And who's laying there by your side? Every night I fall asleep with you. And I ask her just don't forget to think about me and I won't forget you. And I ask her to try and love me to |
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MelissaL Junior Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 22Joshua Tree, CA, US |
WOW. I loved this poem! If a guy felt that way about me and actually wrote it in a beautiful poem like yours, than I would be beyond flattered. I'm looking foward to reading more of your entrees! With much love, Mel  |
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