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She comes to me
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She comes to me |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
She comes to me I watch her drink I watch her comb her hair I watch my babygirl smile at me I watch her take away my pain She comes to me I tell her I am who I am who am well who am I? I tell her dark clouds may hang on me sometimes I tell her I've got her in my head At night when I go to bed And I know it sounds lame, but She's the girl of my dreams. I tell her that my love is true She comes to me And I ask her where are you tonight? And who's laying there by your side? Every night I fall asleep with you. And I ask her just don't forget to think about me and I won't forget you. And I ask her to try and love me to |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Good poem. I think it's great when a guy isn't scared to say stuff like that about a girl. Great poem very sweet keep it up Bel |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
very nice....i'm sure you wrote this and it shows that you are a wonderful writer w/o the songs. i loved this...beautifully heartfelt! salooma |
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