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A Thin Line |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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A THIN LINE There's something between like & love that's undefined,something where 2 hearts start to intertwine. It can't be love, it's not that deep, but you know there's something there to keep. It's not yet love, but it's more than like. You makwe me feel out of sight. I start to smile when I say your name, & I hope that you do the same. I'm standing on a fence, can fall either way. Somehow "I love you" is easiest to say! You are so far away, yet feel so close, this relationship feels stronger than most. You are in my soul, you are in my heart. I knew it was meant to be right from the start. Although you can't see, there's a twinkle in my eye. Telling you "I love you" isn't a lie. What's it between like & luv that remains unclaimed? Probably a heart that has yet to be tamed! I love Keith  LOVE ELMO |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
HEY I REALLY LIKED THIS!! Its sooo true and so sweet. Definetly a great peice! KEep writing.. ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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MelissaL Junior Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 22Joshua Tree, CA, US |
I enjoyed reading your work! I'm going through somewhat the same thing, so I can relate to parts of it. Thanks for sharing this! |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
very sweet and very cute i must say. hope it all works out and hope to read more of all you've got to offer!! salooma |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx every1 I wrote this poem a while ago when I first met my boyfriend I knew I cared about him so much just being with him for a week, but he told me there was no way I could love him already so I wrote this in my state of confusion lol We've been together for 1 year & 3 months now & I know with all my heart that my love for him is as true as it gets so don't worry anyone just listen to your heart it will never lie to you LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
elmo~~~this poem left me speechless...its just perfect...i love it!!!good work...i wish you the best with him!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is a great poem and I just loved this line: You are in my soul, you are in my heart |
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