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Squirter Junior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 17Minnesota |
Tonight I finally called you, I knew I most certainly HAD to! It was great to hear you speak, I was strong and bold, never weak. I was so happy remembering our past, We fell in love; it all happened so fast! I know for now you must live your life, but someday, I want to be your wife. We believe in us, plus one more, Wait, there's God, that makes four. Only four truely believe we'll make it, We've never once had to fake it. Of course we'll make it, together we stand, For you are to me, my highest demand. I'll always stay most true, Honey, oh how I love you! Love Always, Nicole |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey* This was really sweet. And i feel like a ditz asking this cause i know the answer will be so obvious, but who's the 3rd person?? I'm kind of lost, like usual =) Well keep writing.. ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Hey! That was a really good poem. I feel that way about this one guy..shhh. Great ryming. My name is Nicole too! If you would like to talk and share poetry then e-mail me! Talk to ya later. ~Nicole~ Within you I lose myself. Without you I find myself wanting to become lost again. -unkown- |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I'm guessing the third is a child? Maybe? Good poem. Jenn |
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Squirter Junior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 17Minnesota |
Yes, the third person part is hard to understand if you don't know us. The third person is my best friend Nancy, which is coincidentally this guy's cousin! Nicole |
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