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Virgin Suïcide
Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-08-12 08:14 AM


I love you
I need you
I want you
I care for
YOU
I really do

I need to
be with you
lay with you
laugh with you
AND
see you

but I can't...



And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back..........

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LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
1 posted 2000-08-12 02:03 PM


Very cool. I like the simplicity. Keep up the good work!

*~Meredith~*

Somebody stop the world,
I want to get off!
*me

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