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Silent soul
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since 2000-06-10
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tx,usa

0 posted 2000-08-11 02:12 PM


I cry myself a handful
because right now thats all I can do
and I'm begining to think
this frown upon my face
is here for good

I cry myself a handful
because what more can I do
i can not talk to people
because it doesn't help
it just makes things worse and then what they already are

I cry myself a handful
because that's all I can do
as I sit upon my bed day and night
just trying to find my lost light

Still crying myself a handful
because right now thats what I'm good for
but sooner or later my tears will run out
and then whats there to do!

Comments!


peace <3
Silent
Life is to short to be pissed off all the time



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DancinQueen
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA
1 posted 2000-08-18 03:17 AM


Hey! I REALLY liked this. And im sorry no one replied to it sooner! Tough times like the ones your going through are hard to pass. But you'll make it, we all do. Stay strong because things will get better, i promise!  

~!*DQ*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

Acies
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Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
2 posted 2000-08-18 10:42 AM


Great writing!!! Sorry to see what you're going thru though.  Believe me, you can talk to someone who'll understand.  You just have to find the right person to talk to.  The person who you really know cares a lot about what you're going thru.  And if you still don't like what he/she says, don't get mad at me, but sit down and think that they might be right.  Good Luck

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-08-18 01:25 PM


silent~~~i think that you should as acire said try to talk to someone...if it doesnt help why dont you look to yourself for the answers...only you know them...and whats there to do after the tears stop???it will be time to move on...no more tears...more fun and happiness...good luck!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


Silent soul
Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73
tx,usa
4 posted 2000-08-18 04:53 PM


hey thanks yall for replying!

peace <3
Silent
Life is to short to be pissed off all the time



jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
5 posted 2000-08-19 12:20 PM


Think of the happy things in life, forget about the bad memories and moments, keep on a smile and live life for the present and future, dont look back and control what you can, awesome poem, it offered wonderful insentives that might make you want to write more, and I hope you do cause I wish to read more.

Love,
,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_.,



"I will know where I'm headed, cause I'm so tired of the suffering
I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection"
~DMX~ "Prayer III"

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