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Silent soul
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since 2000-06-10
Posts 73
tx,usa

0 posted 2000-08-11 02:06 PM


My life sucks this pain I can't bear
but nobody sems to care
they come and ask are you okay
but never do they really listen
happy i do act
but happy i am really not
thought leavin this world
the world that once was so kind to me
is now but nothing i wish to see
it just seems easier to leave for good
i don't think anyone would miss me
or do you think they would?

Tell me what ya think!




peace <3
Silent
Life is to short to be pissed off all the time



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Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
1 posted 2000-08-11 06:20 PM


Of course you'd be missed, people just don't ever stop and realize what they're missing.  Nice poem
anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
2 posted 2000-08-11 10:39 PM


Silent soul: This is a good poem. As I haven't read much of your work I will most certaintly be looking out for more pieces like this.
Many people would miss you if you left this world. However, you should think of the people you would hurt before you decide to end it all.

~AF~

"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry


Isabelle
Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
Indiana
3 posted 2000-08-11 10:49 PM


Stop and think about all the ppl that are close friends to you..your family...you will be missed whether you think you will or not. Very good poem though. If you ever need someone to talk to be free to e-mail me or AIM me at isabelle lynn..i'll listen. Keep your head up.

Jeanna    

"Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
~Voltaire~


Silent soul
Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73
tx,usa
4 posted 2000-08-11 10:56 PM


Hey thanks ya'll if anyone cares heres my yahoo Im: depressedangel04
Aol Im: trendysaint


peace <3
Silent
Life is to short to be pissed off all the time



Godslilangel
New Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 3

5 posted 2000-08-12 12:59 PM


really good poem and believe me people would miss ya!

[This message has been edited by Godslilangel (edited 08-12-2000).]

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