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GodsPerfktAngel
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since 2000-08-05
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0 posted 2000-08-11 11:32 AM


While the world is going Crazy
While the sky is falling down
  There is one thing that you can depend on
  It's that I'll always be around
While the rain is out side pouing
I can make the sun shine through
I will give my everything
Because I only love you


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sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
1 posted 2000-08-11 02:17 PM


that was very sweet!! I really liked it, keep writing!

Luv,
   ~*~sweetstuff~*~

~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~



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2 posted 2000-08-11 05:54 PM


This is a good poem, but I'm locking this for now, because the author posted 6 poems in one day, which is WAY too much. If you have any questions, feel free to e-mail me.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

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