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Isabelle
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since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
Indiana

0 posted 2000-08-10 11:17 PM


I was looking through the poems I've written in the past months and I came over this one. I thought I would post it since it's right to the point. Kind of corny but it's okay.


Each one is the same
At first infatuation
Bordem sets in
You notice everything
The things you hate
You loose intrest
Realize how different you two are
It's always the same

Why can't I find him?
Someone to spend my time with
A respecting human being
One who loves me for me
Someone who respects my interests
An understanding person
Where is he?



"Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
~Voltaire~


© Copyright 2000 Jeanna - All Rights Reserved
Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

1 posted 2000-08-10 11:19 PM


when you find yours, can you send one over here...Kenosha, WI? j/k don't we all wish for that...I hope we all find him, whoever we're serching for....

salooma

Isabelle
Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
Indiana
2 posted 2000-08-10 11:30 PM


lol..sure girl will do. The thing is my b/f (now ex) and I just broke up when I wrote this hopefully it explains my big wish...lol. I don't think i'll ever find him but don't hurt to wish. Anyways Danke (Thank you) for your post =)

Jeanna

"Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
~Voltaire~


Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
3 posted 2000-08-11 03:24 AM


HEY...I'M RIGHT HERE!!!!  Well....maybe if I didn't happen to live here and you wherever you're at...sorry.  Tell, ya what... I just happen to know that he's not all that far away...you just need to rest you mind and go with the flow...besides, you've got plenty of time.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2000-08-11 07:13 AM


Oh I love these thoughts Isabelle!  Isn't it nice to know that he might be thinking the exact same thing about you at this very moment?  You just haven't bumped into him yet!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
5 posted 2000-08-11 10:52 AM


Great poem, and I'm sure he'll show up someday, just keep looking
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