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Fairy Princess Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 64Fitchburg Ma, USA |
Life's filled with so many things, You figure them out as you go down the road, You'll figure out that your first love doesn't last, I figure out that alot of things aren't fair, I figure out the friends that I have are great, I figure out that if you drink somethings going to happen to you. Then one day you notice your dads dying of cancer I don't know what to say your scared of losing him Then that day comes that you do lose him  Another day you figure out if you push someone away They come back to you (sometimes), Then I'm so happy when they come back. Look! it's another day, I figure out it's your JR year in HS, I don't know what do or say. I have so many friends, I have people caring about me, I have a broken heart thats not going to mend. All I can say is move on Then I remember you have fun. I look at people going places where you can't, Cause you might hurt youself, People ask me why aren't you comming? I don't say anything cause I'm so sad, They don't understand what's "Life" for me, So I move on again. Thats My Lovely Life! ~*~Fairy Princess~*~   Keep hope in you, Keep, dreams in you, And you'll be fine - Unknown |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Great poem! I like it, keep writing! Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~ |
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LoveAll Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 148B'dale, USA |
Good writing! I'm sorry about the loss of your father...God is taking care of him now! Your poem captured your life! God Bless Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3 |
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