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SweetPoet17
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0 posted 2000-08-10 03:50 AM


The true beauty is within us...

Fame meets beauty...
And only few will see...
That the beauty that covers lies within thee...
The beauty that lays within us will meet our goals...
For our appearance is only the beauty of our souls...

The true beauty is within us...

By Jessica DeMaio


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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-08-10 07:15 AM


What beautiful thoughts Jessica ... just lovely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Acies
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2 posted 2000-08-10 10:03 AM


short but has a great message.  Keep it up

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
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3 posted 2000-08-10 10:15 AM


Hi SweetPoet,

This is wonderful, insightful and full of wisdom, so very much enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


Salooma
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4 posted 2000-08-10 11:07 PM


very beautiful....and so true, i love this!

salooma

Lakewalker
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5 posted 2000-08-10 11:09 PM


What a beauty of a poem!  
Jeremy Halstead
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6 posted 2000-08-11 03:11 AM


The beauty was definately within your mind and heart when you wrote that...nice work.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

SweetPoet17
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7 posted 2000-08-11 04:01 PM


Thank you everyone.  
TrueLUV
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8 posted 2000-08-11 07:32 PM


Hey great poem I love the flow of it keep up the awesome work talk to you later.  
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