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LIL.MAMA
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 32


0 posted 2000-08-10 01:16 AM


DEAR DADDY
I LOVE YOU, AND YOU KNOW I DO!!

DEAR DADDY
I WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT I AM SO SORRY FOR ANYTHING I DID TO HERT YOU!!

DEAR DADDY
I KNOW I HAVE DONE ALOT OF THINGS WRONG, BUT NOW AS I AM GETTING TO BE A MATURE YOUNG LADY I REALIZE THAT EVERYTHING YOU TOLD ME WAS RIGHT, EVEN THE TIMES I DID NOT WANT TO BELIVE YOU!!

DEAR DADDY
REMEBER NO MATTER WHAT I WILL ALWAYS BE YOUR LITTLE MONKEY!!!

DEDICATED TO MY DADDY WHO IS ALWAYS THERE FOR ME, EVEN WHEN I AM DOING SOMETHING WRONG!!

I LOVE YOU DAD

LOVE ALLWAYZ YOUR LITTLE MONKEY SARAH

© Copyright 2000 LIL.MAMA - All Rights Reserved
DancinQueen
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Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA
1 posted 2000-08-10 03:47 AM


Hey~ I'm not trying to be rude. But someone JUST posted a poem like soo simlar to this. Now im not raggin on ure poetry..just thought that was a little odd. Keep writing..

~!*DQ*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
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2 posted 2000-08-10 10:17 AM


I'm sure your dad is proud of you too.  It is awesome for someone to write things about their family members...it's so thoughtful.. keep writing

On what DancinQueen said, obviously, people would end up writing about the same things cause people go thru the same emotions and experiences.  We can't stop that.  Sometimes, that's what makes poetry beautiful to other people, when they can apply it to their own personal life or experiences

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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