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jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair

0 posted 2000-08-10 01:00 AM


Enough about what others think, do or say
It's time we all be glad for a day

So blast your favorite song and sing
Do a little happy dance like your the king

Throw away all your problems and free your mind
Think about the happy things that are kind

Everything will be okay tomorrow, let it be
Life's fun all you got to do is make it funny

No more hate, no more crying about the lost
In the end we might all have to pay the cost

Just smile wide and run around like it's fun
Leave it alone and walk under the sun

I hope this little rhyme will help you out
But right now you got to erase that doubt

Drop the problems and reread this poem
Forget about lost lovers, what do yo owe'em ?

Take a walk, go for a run, sing or dance
Make it free your mind of terrible romance

Thanks for listening, I know it was hard
Keep this in mind when the problems bombard


"Keep on a smile, someone will notice it for awhile"
Love,
,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_.,



[This message has been edited by jeremydraul (edited 08-10-2000).]

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The_Driven
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 60

1 posted 2000-08-10 01:20 AM


I couldnt agree with you more. Nice poem. It was fun reading it.
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-08-10 01:51 AM


jeremy~~~wow!!!very impressive...i like it  ...keep up the good work!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVeN~*~

SweetPoet17
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 108

3 posted 2000-08-10 02:50 AM


awww that was so good  
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2000-08-10 07:03 AM


Thank you Jeremy!  I needed a great uplifting poem for a morning smile.  Loved this!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
5 posted 2000-08-10 12:34 PM


I love the suggestions, we all need a day off every now and then

Crystalina123
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

6 posted 2000-08-10 01:09 PM


I think sometimes we all take ourselves too seriouly. This was a great reminder -- thanks!!!

Crystal

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
7 posted 2000-08-10 10:22 PM


bump... cant get enough cheer!
Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

8 posted 2000-08-10 10:31 PM


This definatly brought a smile on my face...thanks for the cheer   Keep these coming, we all need them on the tough days...

much love,
salma

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