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SweetPoet17
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since 2000-08-04
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0 posted 2000-08-09 10:37 PM


“I will wait for you, I will wait for no one but you”
~ Dave Matthews Band
By Jessica DeMaio
The unthinkable arose in my young innocent heart,
And then the unthinkable was spoken from your tender lips; that I could kiss forever,
I can understand what you feel,
I can understand what you want,
But do you understand my heart?
The thought I have when I look into your eyes of a million words,
Is unexplainable.
Is unthinkable,
Is a dream,
A dream that I have longed to come true,
To want so deeply,
And to not have so painfully,
Make you irresistible in my eyes,
Make you irresistible in my heart,
As the silence takes over the words,
The time persists,
Others appear in our lives,
I need you to know,
I need you to remember,
I need you to believe,
I will wait, I will wait for no one but you…



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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-08-09 11:36 PM


sweetpoet~~~what can i say you left me speechless!!!so is there someone that "you will wait for"???who is he???huh???tell us...ha just playing with you...keep up the good work girl!!!< !signature-->

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 08-09-2000).]

LIL.MAMA
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 32

2 posted 2000-08-10 01:05 AM


GRET POEM I REALLY ENJOYED SOUNDS LIKE THE SAME THING THAT I USED TO FEEL ABOUT MY EX, BUT NOW I HAVE DECIED THAT HE WAS NOT WORTH MY TIME!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! AND GOOD LUCK
SweetPoet17
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 108

3 posted 2000-08-10 01:54 AM


Thanks Guys, Naw its something I wrote about 9 months ago about my ex.  Yeah its really funny to read things I wrote so long ago... I never thought I would experience true feelings again, but I did, and what truly gets me through each day is "whats meant to be, will be" and "everything happens for a reason"
-jessica-

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4 posted 2000-08-10 10:43 AM


I'm....speechless.  I just wish that someone would write something like that for me.  Very lovely, sweet, heartfelt poem

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Martini
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-08-10 01:28 PM


wow
i know how that feels
i feel like i have waited forever

i really agree with what you said about everything happening for a reason and what is meant to be will be

it's like i was tlaking reading those words, i tell myself that every single day

excellent read

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

6 posted 2000-08-10 01:30 PM


gotta say this is quite beautiful...eternal love wish we all had it! good luck...

salooma  

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