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thug-a-licious Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 27 |
I hide behind a mask that covers up my tears. It sheilds others from knowing my pain, and my fear. You left me in a fit of rage, becasue you got busted, because you were fake. Now you want me back, but no it's to late for that. I've grown wise to your lies, wise to your lines, and wise to what you really did in your free time! I hide behind my mask so no one will know that I'm really truly hurt. So no one will know what I truly felt for you, Jerk! I thought you were different , I thought you were true, but somewhere deep down I knew the truth. You made me feel loke a person again, you built up my self esteem , you made me feel like a human being. I hide behind this mask so I don't look a fool for believing in love and believing in you! |
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The_Driven Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 60 |
Hey nice poem. Very heartfelt. Its pretty much how anyone in your situation would feel. Its nice how you captured that. Keep up the good work. |
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FeMaLe SeNzAsiaN Junior Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 20 |
In complete honesty, I am a true fan of your work. I really admire your talent and your style of writing. . .you use an excellent choice of words and I can always feel what you are saying. Everything you say is so honest, real, and sincere. I look foward to reading more of your poems. Keep up the great writing! Much Love, SeNzAsiaN |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Very emotional poem. I am truly sorry for what you're going thru. Your writing is excellent and I hope things get better p.s. masks are not good anytime, facing the truth face to face is the best thing to do As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
great writing, i really like that basically b/c i know whay you are going thru, i hope you are feeling better real soon. Well great poem, keep writing! Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~ |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I know what you going through which madee your poem so awsome.keep up the awsome work I cant wait to read more! Lauren |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
very nice....one of your best i must say, the emotion u put in this makes it wonderful cause the words become believable and imaginable. keep em coming....wonderful writing! salooma |
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