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The_Driven
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0 posted 2000-08-09 09:21 PM



For years i had thought you
To be one of me.
Our differences settled,
As far as I could see.

But, under the veil of friendship,
Yourself you had hid.
To conceal the vile, heinous
Act of treachery you did.

Like the chameleon who hides itself,
So that no one can see,
Was the way you covered your tracks,
So you could commit HERESY.

For now, I have lost.
I'll admit it, I got played.
Hope your victory's as sweet,
as the blood on your blade.

You'll feel my presence someday.
You'll regret what you've done.
Hope you enjoy it while it lasts,

This war's just begun!

NOTE: This did NOT happen to me in any way, shape or form. As a matter of fact, i posted this cuz i had just watched SURVIVOR, and well...when you got the ideas, and the time...well, there it is! Thanx for reading!


Fetch me another plaything,
this one seems to have broken!

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Jenn Cirrincione
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1 posted 2000-08-09 10:23 PM


Cool, I've actually never seen that show... but I like your poem. Keep it up!
Jenn

jeremydraul
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2 posted 2000-08-09 10:53 PM


Never saw the show but I liked this poem. I like how you wrote sweet at the beginning but grew very mad, gives the poem meaning.

Love,
,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_.,

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