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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-08-09 05:22 PM


So much of what they say is true,
An idle brain is the devil's playground.
I detest change...
But I believe that is what results from being conditioned.

I see the same thing everyday.
The same people,
Who can I trust?

I'm slowly going crazy.
I can't fix things.
People make me sick,
And the ordinary makes me insane.

I feel so alone,
Oddly, I'm the most alone when surrounded by dozens of bodies.
I scream out loud, yet no one hears.


[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 08-09-2000).]

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Isabel Galaxia
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1 posted 2000-08-10 09:47 PM


Whoa, that was really good.  Not quite sure I understand all of it, but that may be cuz I'm not totally here today  .  Keep it up
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2 posted 2000-08-10 10:10 PM


that was such an awsome poem and I do understand all of it.Keep up the awsome work!
  Lauren

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3 posted 2000-08-10 10:48 PM


gosh, can you read my mind or what....I think I know how you are feeling. condemned, sick, angry, disgusted with the word, well i feel like that....just somedays the slightest word can shake your nerves and put u on edge...
good luck!

salooma

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4 posted 2000-08-23 08:05 PM


It'nt it just the chlaustrophobia of life? Thanks for the responses!
Jenn

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