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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada 
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Silence when the world is buzzing all I hear is Silence Wanting without you here beside me I am left Wanting Needing all the love I once felt that I now am Needing Smiling I sit and think of thoughts of you and I am Smiling Laughing remembering all our good times and I remain Laughing Hoping all the emotions come back to wondering if you too are Hoping "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was great! i like it! Well i know how that feelz  Keep writing! Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
martini~~~i liked this alot!!! i like it how you made the first word and last word go together in the same sentence!!!keep up the good work!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Sweetstuff: I'm glad you liked.... It kinda just came to me sitting at work Erin: As always thanks!!! I'm glad you enjoyed this one |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really liked this one too, good job  |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
lakewalker thanks i'm glad you enjoyed  "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wonderful style you got here...definatly a joy to read....i like it...keep these coming!! salooma |
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lupigirl Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 19Mequon, Wisconsin |
I KNOW EXACTLY WHAT THIS FEELS LIKE!!!  Thank you for sharing your feelings... it makes me remember how much I love the ones I do. Thank you SMILE!! |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
I can relate all to well to this poem, but it showed alot of emotion and reminds me of my style of writing, nice job. -jessica- |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
salooma thanks so much I'll see what I can do about keeping them coming Lupigirl thank you so much Sweet Poet thanks greatly!! Similar styles eh!! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I very much enjoyed this piece. The style, the form, the way you made it all come together. Great writing. When you are old and grey and full of sleep, And nodding by the fire, take down this book, And slowly read, and dream of the soft look Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep; How many loved your moments of glad grace, And loved your beauty with love false or true, But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you, And loved the sorrows of your changing face... William Butler Yeats |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
thanks so much I'm glad you enjoyed |
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