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jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair

0 posted 2000-08-09 01:02 AM


Sorrow won't describe the feelings inside
For I didnt know my words would scare you
I just wanted to have nothing to hide
You held in feelings that I never knew

For now I'll be a wonderful friend
But I can't bottle my love forever
I'll care about you until the end
Through thick and thin and ugly weather

I didn't mean to push you away
It hurts so much when you ignore me
I don't want to say just sorry, its cliche
Close friends is all I ever wished to be

Please forgive me for all I've changed
I wish we'd go back to what we had
This madness is making me crazed
Your voice is the only thing that makes me glad

,.-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-.,
&
,.-=-~^* Salooma *^~-=-.,


Thanks Salooma, your the best!



© Copyright 2000 Jeremy Daniel Raulinaitis - All Rights Reserved
A16Princess16
New Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 2

1 posted 2000-08-09 01:08 AM


way to go babe!!!!! another great one!!!

              Love

                 Deb


SweetPoet17
Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108

2 posted 2000-08-09 01:10 AM


I really enjoyed it  
-jessica-

Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

3 posted 2000-08-09 12:43 PM


Thanks for all the credit, even though you are the poet here! You're the sweetest! Hope we can do more...

Much Love,
Salooma

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