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jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

0 posted 2000-08-08 07:48 PM

I know this is a little off my subject, but I need a change. We all need a change once in awhile, right?

I want it all
From the hills and mountains
to the springs, falls and fountains

I want it all
From the birds, sky, stars and moon
to the valleys, rivers and dunes

I want it all
From all the love to all the fame
to the perfect smile to the best game

I want it all
From the cutest girl and loving family
to the most precious form of reality

I want it all
From the most sceneric views from my house
to the surprised look on the face of my spouse

I want it all
From the burning desire and most caring friends
to the time I die, I want it all in the end

,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_.,

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2000-08-08 08:16 PM

I don't want it all, just more of your incredible poetry:

I really liked this, keep it up.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-08-08 08:18 PM

Oops, wrong smiley

A16Princess16
New Member

since 2000-08-08

Posts 2

3 posted 2000-08-08 09:03 PM

hey babe!!! love the new poem!! keep em coming and let me know when there's more!!!! You're really good!!!!

Debrah

SweetPoet17
Member

since 2000-08-04

Posts 108

4 posted 2000-08-09 12:37 PM

-------speechless------
Beauty is all I can say.
-jess-

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

5 posted 2000-08-09 02:47 AM

Thanks y'all. Im glad you liked it. I tried changing the subject. I hope others with respond!

,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_.,

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2000-08-09 06:08 AM

Wonderful poem Jeremy! With a positive attitude like this ... there's no stopping you! Great work!

Best wishes,
/Kit

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

7 posted 2000-08-09 12:30 PM

I'm glad you 'changed the subject'. It's about time someone brought some joy to this forum! (just kidding, guys) I'm really chiding myself here, I'm the one who's always so friggin depressing! Honestly though, Jeremy, this was very cute. A new side of you. Don't lock him up again!

*~Meredith~*

Somebody stop the world,
I want to get off!
*me

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

8 posted 2000-08-09 12:37 PM

Great poem Jeremy...sorry it took me so long to post! But I loved this the first time I read it...you got wonderful talent!

Salooma

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