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MoonPrincess
Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 29
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2000-08-08 05:23 PM


Do you ever wonder
what would've been,
had we stayed together?

Do you ever wonder
if things would have
worked out in this way?

Do you ever wonder
what I'm doing
at this very moment?

Do you ever wonder
if I think of you
from time to time?


~MoonPrincess


"Love begins with a smile,
grows with a kiss,
and ends with a tear."

© Copyright 2000 MoonPrincess - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
1 posted 2000-08-08 08:35 PM


Yes you have to wonder
if what if what you say is true
But don't waste your time just wondering
or your life'll be just blue
Nice poetry MoonPrincess

Ana
Junior Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 16
iLLINOIs
2 posted 2000-08-09 11:02 AM


Great poem! It's the first one I have read of yours, but I will look forward to more!  

~~ana~~

LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
3 posted 2000-08-09 12:06 PM


Do you ever wonder if someone has been looking into your head and writing about what they found?   I'm serious, I feel this exact way about a certain person in my life. Awesome poem, babe!

*~Meredith~*

I want to publish scenes
And rage against machines
I want to pierce my tongue,
It doesn't hurt, it feels fine......
*Harvey Danger

sweetstuff101
Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
4 posted 2000-08-09 05:05 PM


i really liked that, i can totally relate to it
Well great poem, keep writing!

Luv,
  ~*~sweetstuff~*~


~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~



MoonPrincess
Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 29
Wisconsin, USA
5 posted 2000-08-11 06:08 PM


Thanx all, your replies mean a lot to me... It's good to know that people understand what I'm talking about...
~MoonPrincess

"Love begins with a smile,
grows with a kiss,
and ends with a tear."

DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
6 posted 2000-08-31 02:35 AM


yes, it is good to wonder, but remember my friend, it is well to reflect on the past, but not to dwell on it too long, for living in the past is like living with hate, it will tear away at your soul with if but ors and what not.
Love ya,
Sammy

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desi

Misty Blue
Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44

7 posted 2000-08-31 11:22 PM


Hey, you know what? You forever cool in my book cause everytime I'm contemplating about something you done wrote a poem about it to help me out(Please don't go and now this one). All I can say is thanks for sharing your talent. Stay tru
DancinQueen
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Senior Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA
8 posted 2000-08-31 11:43 PM


Hey! This was great..i "wonder" all the time. Keep up the great work  

~!*DQ*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

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