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Ana Junior Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 16iLLINOIs |
I dare you to step into the light Indulge in the outrageous. You'll hold your chin slightly higher Become aware of your breathing. The perfect necessities you'll need for slipping by unnoticed To throw yourself into the arms of a hurricane and the eye of a storm. This is the age of innocence Perfect for nurturing a promise. Renew your clarity of the colors of life And enjoy the sweet sophistication of the mystery. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
This was awesome. It just has that mystery auroa (i think i spelled that wrong sorry!)..neways..it has that mystery auroa surrounding it. IT was really deep and passionate. KEep up the great work  ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very deep indeed, we all should take this dare sometimes. Nice poem |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Very mysterious, I enjoyed it bunches, like DQ said, it's got a really special "aura" (correct spelling). Anyways, I hope to see more of this passionate writing, keep it going!Love, ,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_., |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Wow, nice poem. I like the feeling it has. Short and sweet. You know, I once had a girlfriend named Ana. |
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