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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
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just about where I want to be

0 posted 2000-08-08 04:28 PM


Colors of lavendar and white
Move before my eyes
People dancing slow and smooth
Like puffy clouds

Veiled by thin silk
I float down an aisle of clouds
To the man I love
A moment not forgotten

A look of pure joy
And love I see in his eyes
I send feelings to
His heart knowing he feels them

He slips gold on my finger
A never ending band of love
Promising faithfulness and truth
Till death do us part

Frozen for a moment
Everything stands still
A moment of time
Changes eternity


Lavada Miller

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin



© Copyright 2000 Lavada Miller - All Rights Reserved
MoonPrincess
Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 29
Wisconsin, USA
1 posted 2000-08-08 05:25 PM


Did Miss Lavada get married?? Congrats, my dear... I wish you the best....
Love,
MoonPrincess

"Love begins with a smile,
grows with a kiss,
and ends with a tear."

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
2 posted 2000-08-09 12:36 PM


What great words to describe this wonderful event!  I loved it
Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

3 posted 2000-08-09 12:40 PM


No....you got married Lavada?? That's awesome! Last time I was here you were going through a though break up with your fiance. Tell me this is true....awesome though!

Congrats,
Salma

LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
4 posted 2000-08-09 12:45 PM


Hey, whether you've actually experienced this or you're just looking forward to it, I wish you the best of luck!

*~Meredith~*

Somebody stop the world,
I want to get off!
*me

Jenn Cirrincione
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Fl
5 posted 2000-08-09 07:16 PM


Congrats to you, if this happened. I hope you have met the love of your life.
Jenn

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
6 posted 2000-08-09 11:07 PM


You really re-created this momment. Its as if I was there! Great work.

Love,
,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_.,

sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
7 posted 2000-08-10 12:47 PM


Hi all! Yes, I got married! A little over a month ago. I showed my husband the poem, and he just adored it   Thanks all for the replies, this is my 1st real poem since I've been back  

Thanks again!

Stay cool

Lavada

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin



Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
8 posted 2000-08-10 01:57 PM


hey lavada,
CONGRATS   on your getting married...

and a fine poem by the way...

regards,
sudhir.

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
9 posted 2000-08-10 02:04 PM


~*~CONGRATULATIONS~*~good poem...i wish you the best in life with this person!!!
Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

10 posted 2000-08-10 10:38 PM


Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wish you the best of luck and lots of love  

Salooma


[This message has been edited by Salooma (edited 08-10-2000).]

sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
11 posted 2000-08-11 12:53 PM


Thanks all for the replies! They mean alot to me!  

stay cool

Lavada

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin



SweetPoet17
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 108

12 posted 2000-08-11 03:49 PM


Awww this poem was so sweet
-jessica-

Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06
Posts 380
Maine, USA
13 posted 2000-08-11 03:59 PM


CONGRATS!! Hope you and your husband are very happy!  
Tamma
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV
14 posted 2000-08-11 04:07 PM


Vada...I didn't even know  

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.


sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
15 posted 2000-08-15 02:08 PM


Thanks guys...Rick thought it was too!   Tamma, I posted an announcement in the Announcements & Links Forum...Maybe you didn't see it???

stay cool! Thanks for the replies!  

Lavada

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin



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