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Misty Blue
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since 2000-05-24
Posts 44


0 posted 2000-08-08 03:54 PM


This Game


So my time is up?
I was just your summer rain?
Is that what's up?
Damn, what did I gain?

So you played me?
It was her the whole time?
You really just used me?
You think everthing is fine?

So you find joy in others pain?
Hey, what can I say?
To you it's just a game
Damn, can I play?

© Copyright 2000 Misty Blue - All Rights Reserved
Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-08-08 04:39 PM


mistyblue~~~check out my poem The Game...its almost similar to this one...but its the game that i played...i am sorry that this guy did this to you...keep up the good work...

~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~

~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
2 posted 2000-08-08 04:42 PM


mistyblue, I'm sorry things didn't work out for you. But you know what they say..."There are two players to every game" Sound advice..maybe you could use it...Again I'm sorry things didn't work out for ya. Looking forward to seeing more of your work  

stay cool

Lavada

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin



The_Driven
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 60

3 posted 2000-08-09 12:33 PM


It really sucks to be used. Hang in there though, itll be okay (im assuming that his really happened..?) Well anyway, nice poem,, fine job. Keep it up!
SweetPoet17
Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108

4 posted 2000-08-09 02:32 AM


Im sorry I know how it is to be used, I am really sorry  (
-jessica-

Jenn Cirrincione
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since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107
Fl
5 posted 2000-08-09 05:17 PM


Getting used sucks a lot. I'm deeply sorry for you. A note here: summer flings are not all they're cracked up to be. Good luck.
Jenn

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