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thug-a-licious
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since 2000-08-08
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0 posted 2000-08-08 02:13 PM


When you're overwhelmed with love you see nothing but the skys above.Your heart beats a mile- a- minute , when someone speaks you just don't hear it.
When you're ovewhelmed with love , nothing and no one else seems to matter. Your eyes see only beautiful things , your stoumach is full of funny feelings.
  When you're over whelmed with love your heart is blind, you never see anything bad, you never seem to mind. Your heart gets broken , but still you love. Your trust is broken but still you love.
  When you're overwhelmed with love your heart remains true, no matter how or what the one you love does to you!

I know this contradicts my other poem, but There's no such thing was written after this poem!
~Alexis~


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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-08-08 02:51 PM


thug~~~this was another good poem...keep up the good work...whether or not it contradicts the other one it is still good...

~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~

~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~

*ChrisLover*
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 46
erie, colo
2 posted 2000-08-08 03:35 PM


~thug~
hey there gret poem!! i really liked it!! i hope i can see more of you rgood ones out there!! i have a few out ther but im knida new so yeah.... hope to see your poems around!
love janette

Everything happens for a reason.. sometimes it's bad, but sometime it's good!! just remeber there's people out here who care!

Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
3 posted 2000-08-08 04:10 PM


Terrific poem.  Keep up the great work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

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