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SweetPoet17
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 108


0 posted 2000-08-07 09:54 PM



I Carry On…
By Jessica DeMaio
I turn my head…
I take a breathe…
I look up…
I carry on…

Screaming and fighting…
Looks of sorrow…
Looks of sadness…
I carry on…

Moments of true bliss…
Tears of Joy…
You yearn for that love
That you now miss…

A sunny day…
A night of hell…
A pondering mind…
I scream…
Where is the time?

I look at us…
Mature…
Strong…
We have grown…

I carry on…

With each passing day…
Tears and Laughter…
I learn something new in a different way…


Life…
Full of sacrifice…

But yet I carry on…
I Carry On…
By Jessica DeMaio
I turn my head…
I take a breathe…
I look up…
I carry on…

Screaming and fighting…
Looks of sorrow…
Looks of sadness…
I carry on…

Moments of true bliss…
Tears of Joy…
You yearn for that love
That you now miss…

A sunny day…
A night of hell…
A pondering mind…
I scream…
Where is the time?

I look at us…
Mature…
Strong…
We have grown…

I carry on…

With each passing day…
Tears and Laughter…
I learn something new in a different way…


Life…
Full of sacrifice…

But yet I carry on…

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Isabelle
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since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
Indiana
1 posted 2000-08-07 10:36 PM


Awesome poem. This one has great meaning. Keep it up.

Jeanna  

"Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
~Voltaire~


Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-08-07 11:10 PM


sweetpoet~~~2 thumbs up for you!!!keep up the good work...

~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~

~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~

Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
3 posted 2000-08-08 08:57 AM


Great poem.  Keep up the great work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

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