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Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

0 posted 2000-08-07 07:27 PM


~This is for my birthday, which is on Wednesday and I won't be here so I am posting this early.  I hope you all enjoy it.~

My Birthday

Today is supposed to be a good day
I am just getting older
Why bother?
I know it only comes once a year
Why celebrate, your only going to die
It's great when you are 1 or 5
You just keep getting older
It's supposed to be a happy day
But without you here it's nothing
Yeah what a great day
Another year older
Another week wiser
Another day without you

~I hope that you really like this poem.  I can't wait to hear the replies.  Eventually I will tell you who this is about.~


"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

© Copyright 2000 Michelle Y. Plocinik - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-08-07 07:35 PM


~*~HAPPY BIRTHDAY CHEL~*~ i hope that you have a blast!!! by the way how old are you gonna be??? and whoever this person is must be really special that this birthday would be nothing without this person...


~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~

~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~

Euclid the Kid
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since 2000-07-15
Posts 51
Eugene,Oregon
2 posted 2000-08-07 07:44 PM


Chel,
I hope he surprises you and comes around
So that on your Birthday
Happiness will be found
I hope start looking brighter
And your life becomes so fulfilling
You'll forget that aging thing
It will be so interesting!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY CHEL!  Let have a Party!!!

Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
3 posted 2000-08-08 08:47 AM


Thanx you two.  I really apperciate the responses and birthday wishes.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

4 posted 2000-08-08 11:47 AM


Happy Birthday Chel!!!
Hope yours is truely a wonderful day filled with all that life can offer!
Don't I sound like the inside of a greeting card? Anyways...
Hope you find that one more year will make you one year happier too....
Have a wonderful day!

Salooma

LoveBug
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5 posted 2000-08-08 12:17 PM


HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!



I hope you have a great one, with or without this person you're writing about! Just remember, everyone here loves you!!!!

          

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

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