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Lurdburger
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 39
Carlisle, Cumbria, England

0 posted 2000-08-07 07:28 AM


To hold you when I'm sad
To miss you when you're not there
To love you for what you are
Makes some think I'm stupid
But there is a few who understand.
When you sing with me, I need no other.
Pressing your curves against me,
I'm comforted.
So as we listen and sing to our song
I hope you're as happy as I am
Because if the world and its friends fail me,
I can still play guitar.




[This message has been edited by Lurdburger (edited 08-07-2000).]

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Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

1 posted 2000-08-07 12:13 PM


Really nice...ode to your guitar, eh? Well beautifully written and flows smoothly...

Salooma

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