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CharliesBaby
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since 2000-08-07
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0 posted 2000-08-07 03:33 AM


A bestfriend is someone who will always be there for you,
To laugh with you, to cry with you and to always see you through.
A best friend is someone who will never stab you in the back,
who will always be by your side and to put you on the right track.
A best friend is someone who will do anything to make you smile,
who will themselves look dumb but know it was all worth while.
A best friend is someone who will never leave you for a guy,
cause they know in the end the guy will only make them cry.
A best friend is someone who will never let you down,
who would walk a hundred miles just to take away your frown.
A best friend is someone who will talk to you all night long,
who will encourage you in all you do and tell you to be strong.
I  looked for a long time and i found out that it's true that Dawn Rene Stout,
My best friend is you!


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Lone Insomniac
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 45

1 posted 2000-08-07 07:02 AM


hey !!
nice poem...!!
=)
i think it's a bit messy (too many words after eachother)
but the poem itself is great !!!
keep up the good work !!!
greetz
-Robin-

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-08-07 08:45 AM


Welcome to Passions CharliesBaby!  

This is a wonderful tribute to friendship,
and the flow is lovely!
A terrific first post ... hope to read more!

(check your e-mail for a special message)

Best wishes,
/Kit

Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

3 posted 2000-08-07 11:59 AM


Welcome to Passions!! Great poem, thanks for sharing it. It reminds me of a friend of mine too....how sweet!

Salooma

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-08-07 12:49 PM


welcome to passions!!! i hope that you like it here...this was a good first post...i think that all of us have a friend like that...i know that i do...

~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~

~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~

GodsPerfktAngel
Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 28
Ohio
5 posted 2000-08-10 10:58 AM


Hey!!!!!
  I love the poem it totally ROX!!!!! but the thing I want to know is....why am I not your best friend?!?!?!

ANYWAYS... your poem is good~~~
BYE!!!
                       Jocelyn marie Cosgray

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
6 posted 2000-08-10 06:18 PM


Welcome to Passions!That poem reminded me of my best friend.Keep up the awsome work I cant wait to read more.
  LaUrEn

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
7 posted 2000-08-10 06:26 PM


Welcome to Passions!  Thanks for sharing your poem, it was good
lupigirl
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since 2000-06-16
Posts 19
Mequon, Wisconsin
8 posted 2000-08-11 01:10 AM


Cute poem!  I have a best friend... his name is Andre...
Thank you for reminding me why I love him so much...     SMILE!!

DancinQueen
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA
9 posted 2000-08-11 02:22 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!~ This was a great first post. Bestfriends are almost a neciesity in life. And im so privelaged to have 2 of them =)I love this quote i read somewhere.."Friends are angels that lift us up off our feet when our wings have trouble remebering how to fly."
Keep writing*

~!*DQ*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

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