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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
hatrid breeds in all of us... ~Hate to...~ hate to love hate to bleed hate to feel hate to need hate to want hate to breath need to leave feeling greed minions feed hatrid breeds inside scemes true dreams love feinds peace leaves hate breeds death feeds life leaves. Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
anyone think i should change the title? Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Lone Insomniac Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45 |
man i really luv this poem !! I think it's great...and uhmm...well I think your title won't attract much people...I just love to hate, so I liked it.... if U want people to read it a lot..I'd change it...but if you think this is the right title ...leave it this way... greetz -Robin- |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Great post....i don't think you need to change the title. It's great the way it is. I love the style you gave this....flows smoothy with only a few words. Salooma |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
thanx insomiac...i love to hate too...not really...more like i hate to love...cuz it hurts.. salooma..i'm taking your advice and keeping it the way it is...thanks for your replies... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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