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as lies on the ground
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as lies on the ground |
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Regina New Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 7montreal, quebec, canada |
As he lies on the ground with a bullet through his she cries heart wrenching sobs they were suppose to die together like romeo and Juliet with the dagger and the poison She told him she loved do anything for him they were going to die together she wanted die he wanted to die as the bullet went through his skull she wanted to live not die as days pass she walks in sorrow for the love of her life is dead and its all her fault she could have stopped her long black blowing wildly in the iwnd as they lowered his body in the inky grave she knew they had made a mistake she ran forward and dropped a black rose a red and a white rose on his coffin she spoke three words "I Love you, James" |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Awsome poem I really liked it keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Welcome to PAssions! Great post....hope to read more. And a wonderful sad tale! Salooma |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Regina! This is a powerful first post. I'm relieved that the slant on this poem does not glorify suicide, but rather, it shows the sad reality and heartbreak that is left behind. Take care ... (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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