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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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Where ever you went he went to, but you see he was always one step ahead of you. Whatever you did he did to, somehow he always knew what you were gonna do. Whenever you were out he was to, and its scary cuz you dont know what he may do. These people come into our lives out of the blue, and its scary to think but this is all true. This is someone who puts our lives in constant fear, whether or not, hes far or near. Someone who can give you the shivers and shakes, in your mind whether you sleeping or awake. Its scary to think this can happen to me, scary to think right now someone can be watching me. ***I just seen a movie, a girl was being stalked. This guy followed her around wherever she was even when she moved out of the state. ***5% of women these days are stalked and its scary cuz the person doing the stalking can be your best friend or someone you dont know but yet they know EVERYTHING about you. ~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~ ~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~ |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
That was such an awsome poem I just wanted to say that.Keep up the great work I cant wait to read more! Lauren |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
lauren~~~thanks for the reply im glad that you liked it...but dont you find it creepy that someone can be watching your every move??? after i watched that movie i just wonder...you know what i mean??? ~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~ ~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Wow...I didn't know that 5% of women today are stalked thanks for sharing it and it certainly makes you take caution these days. Thanks for sharing it!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
salooma~~~doesnt it make you think???i mean 5% isnt a whole lot...but still me or you or any other girl in the forum can be part of that... p.s.~~~i just found that out today!!! ~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~ ~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~ |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Hey kid...this really is a good poem..make sure ya read mine. By the way...it might be a good idea to look behind you right about............................................................................................................................................................................... ......................................................NOW!!!!!!!.....hehehe..j/k Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Lone Insomniac Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45 |
Hey !!! It's a nice poem about stalkers, I like the way U wrote it anywayz =) I also like it cuz it's about something else than love...hhmm...more people should try that I guess...me included !!! well keep up writing stuff !! greetz -Robin- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nicely written, Erin... regards, sudhir |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
cool poem erin that is really weird and scary |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
thank you all for the replies they really mean alot to me!!! oh and jeremy you think your funny im gonna kick you butt!!!!! ~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~ ~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Erin, very true poem. I liked the way you wrote it. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
This poem is so true it's scary. It's nice to see a poem that's not the same ole stuff over and over..even though i'm guilty of the same ole stuff lol. Well u did a good job. Keep it up. Jeanna  "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
That was a very true yet scary feeling, sorry to say but your right its definitely true... Check out my poem Mirror of tears I would really like to know what you think of it. -jessica- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
chel~~~thank you for the reply...im glad that you liked it!!! isabelle~~~isnt it scary???and we are all guilty of posting the same types of poems...thanks for the reply... sweetpoet~~~not knowing if someone could be watching you at this very moment is really scary...im gonna go check out your poem right now... ~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~ ~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
OOOh, this is really spooky! Gosh, to think that someone could be watching you right now, and you would never know it. The technology that can be involved is amazing... and scary. Someone could be taping you with a camera small enough that you would never notice! You describe the fear well, Erin. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
lovebug~~~i never thought of that...of being taped and no that i think of it...it could happen too!!!thats scary...i mean someone can get in your house when your not home...and do who knows what...and just like you said about technology today they have more stuff out there... ~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~ ~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~ |
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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
Erin,you are such a deep writer.I really like this poem b/c believe it or not I was actually stalked by someone before and it was so scary.Fortunately he went to jail on a different charge.And I moved before he got out so he doesn't know where I am right now.Stay Tru [This message has been edited by Misty Blue (edited 08-08-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
mistyblue~~~i am sorry that this happened to you...to me it just seems like a scary thought...i am glad that you moved hopefully this guy will stay in jail for a long time...thanks for the reply... ~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~ ~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~ |
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