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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair 
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Who's that person that I see A reflection appears in front of me Are those tears falling from my cheek? I havn't seen you in a couple weeks Your smile, face and laugh sustain In my mind and I cant maintain I try and laugh but theres no chance These tears come out with only a glance Your picture in my wallet reminds me Of the times we shared and the memories Just one more look at your face or picture And Ill break down in tears cause I lost her This puddle I have created in front of me Gives me a reflection of what we used to be |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I loved your poem is was so awsome.Keep up the freat work! Lauren |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wow jeremy another great one....i wish there was some way to make you feel better, but i think you'll see that writing poetry will help you get through pain as it does with me. keep writing and feel free to icq or email me at any time.... salooma |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Thanks Salooma, your the best. Ill talk to sometime babe. ,.-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-., |
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